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Bitterleaf — A Naruto Fanfiction

Chapter 12: Forty, Then Eighty

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The high stand turned late, the way high ground always did.

It stood above the first stands, in colder air, and its leaf came to the year a full turning after the low shoulder's. Ren had left it alone at the first gathering on purpose. A stand taken too early gives a thin leaf, and thin leaf makes a thin cure, and this stand was the shop's last leaf of the autumn.

He went up for three mornings with the big basket. He cut it the way the low stands had been cut — outer leaves, crown spared, nothing stripped. He came down at noon to the street's ordinary work, with the yard's racks empty and ready.

The second drying went the way the first had gone, slower by the season. Turning at morning and evening. The smudge fire low at the racks' end. The jars scalded, the leaf in dry and full, the wax worked round with the hot knife, the label tied on with the name, the drying week, and his mark.

Toma counted the new seals by tens, with his finger on each, and then counted the rows in the back room whole, the old forty and the new together, the way a sum is proved — from the start, not from the middle.

"Forty," said the boy, at the first rows' end. Then, at the last jar: "Eighty."

Ren set it down in the day book, under the boy's count.

Forty, then eighty. The reserve stands at eighty cures, dried and sealed. Two dryings. Two gatherings. No jar without its label, no label without its drying written on it.

Then the autumn sent its week of wet, the way the autumn always did in the end — and the standing order at the foot of the spring page came due.

It rained seven days. Not the storm's violence. A steady, soaking wet. It got into roofs and boots and tempers. It stood in the lower street and ran in the gutters. In seven days it never once let the stones dry.

Every morning of that week, before the shutter went up, Ren went into the back room. He set his palm flat to the wall above the tarred seam. He held it there. He read the wall the way he read a forehead.

Dry. The first morning, and the second, and the third. The tar held. The seam held. The wall kept the word it had given in the spring, under the winter's weight this time, with eighty jars breathing at its back.

But a room is more than its wall. By the fourth morning, the air in the back room had gone close and heavy, the way air goes in a closed box of green things. The jars' wax stood cold and damp to his thumb. The leaf inside the jars was dry. But it was drinking the room's wet through every seal's edge, slow as roots drink. And the lowest shelf stood nearest the floor, where the week's damp climbed the way it had climbed in the spring.

He did not wait to find out how much the room could hold. A sentence was not a hope, and he had not written it as one.

That morning he went down to the charcoal seller by the gate, with the autumn counter's money in his sash. He bought charcoal against the rest of the week — sack on sack of it, black and light, ringing dry in the hand. He counted out the price on the seller's board, in the rain.

Charcoal for the back room: one thousand eight hundred ryō.

Two braziers went into the back room that day, set on flat stones. They were kept low and small, and never once left to burn unwatched. A brazier near dried leaf is a servant you watch the way you watch a sick child. Ren slept in the shop those nights, on the floor by the counter. He rose in the night to feed them their little, and no more. On the second night of it he woke to the room's smell gone close again. One brazier had sunk to a grey eye. He caught it in the dark and fed it. He stood in the doorway breathing the room back to dryness. When the sun came, he wrote that down too. Vigilance had a price. The price was a week's broken sleep, and it was cheaper than jars. The room's air dried by degrees, the way a fever cools by degrees. The jars came up off the lowest shelf, all of them, and stood on the high shelves and the counter's dry end in rows, out of the floor's reach, until the room could be trusted with them again.

On the fifth day of the wet, with the rain still standing in the street and no gathering and no drying to be done, the month's other work came due, and Ren took the test cabinet down.

A man whose hands were kept from their true work did his other work. That was the shop's way, and the cabinet waited in the dark for its knock the same in rain as in sun. Toma mixed the twelve jars behind the counter, with the labels wrapped and the true order chalked face-down on the slate, and set them in their row.

Ren went down the row the slow way — the front of the nose, then the back, then the tongue where the tongue was safe. Damp weeks dulled a nose the way they dulled everything. He took his time, and the time was not enough for three of them.

The fever-bark he named willow, with the room's wet standing in his nose where the true smell should have stood first. The two dried leaves, sisters off one stem, he told the wrong way round, trusting the jar's weight in his hand over the smell he should have waited for. And the camphor he answered before the smell had finished arriving — the word out of his mouth ahead of his nose, haste wearing the mask of knowledge.

Nine of twelve. Under the ceiling the book had set for him in the spring. The errors stood written as errors, with their causes beside them, plain as any count in the book.

Nine of twelve, in the wet week. The damp stood in my nose for the first. My hand answered for the second, and my hand is a worse witness than my nose. The third I answered before I had smelled. The book does not take the week's weather as an excuse. Neither do I.

On the seventh morning the rain had thinned to a drizzle. The wall stood dry under his palm for the seventh day. He went along the jars that had stood lowest. He opened the six that had stood nearest the floor's climb, at the end where the damp had pooled thickest.

The smell came up out of the first one before the wax was half off. Sour, and shut-in, and sweet underneath — the smell of fruit that has sat too long in its own juice. The spring's smell, in the spring's room, come back for its six.

He opened all six. All six were the same. The bloom had run through the leaf past anything an eye could save — and a jar half-cleaned and resealed is a lie with a label on it, and this shop's labels were not lies.

Then he took down one more jar. It was the one that had stood highest through the week, on the top shelf, farthest from the floor's climb. He opened it standing in the doorway. A bound is only a bound when it is tested. The leaf inside smelled true, and deep, and dry as a snapped twig. The wet had kept to its floor and its six. He sealed the jar again with fresh wax, and wrote its label twice over, so the winter would know it had been opened and proved, and by whom.

He carried the six out to the yard brazier, and burned them one at a time, the way the eighteen had burned in the spring — read the label aloud first, then the jar in, then the next. Leaf of the second drying. His mark. The autumn. Burned, not sold. Counted, not forgotten.

That night he wrote the week's page in full, because a week like that one deserved its whole writing.

The wet week: seven days. The wall dry every day of it — the spring's sentence, answered at the winter's weight. The air failed where the floor climbs. Charcoal burned from the fourth morning: one thousand eight hundred ryō, and the room held.

Eighty sealed. Six lost to the wet — the six that stood lowest. Seventy-four stand.

Under the count he wrote the week's lesson where the next autumn would find it, in the ink his grandmother had saved for rules.

Leaf never stands on the lowest shelf. The lowest shelf is for roots and jars of stone. The floor's damp climbs in any week of rain, and a seal is only as dry as the shelf it stands on.

In the morning the rain stopped, and the sun came back thin and low over the wet roofs. The braziers went out. The seventy-four jars went back into the back room in their rows — on the high shelf and the middle shelf, with the low shelf standing empty under them, the way the new rule said it should.

The reserve stood in the dark smelling of leaf and faint charcoal smoke: eighty seals' worth of autumn work, less six that the wet had taken, every one of them named, counted, and dry.