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Bitterleaf — A Naruto Fanfiction

Chapter 39: The Wave, Counted

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The first snow came in the night, without wind.

Ren found it at the door in the grey of the morning: the street white from wall to wall, the roofs white, the well's rope stiff with it, and behind the shop the beds gone under a level white that kept their rows the way a cloth keeps the shape of what it covers. The street's sounds came up muffled. Doors that opened at first light all the year stood shut. Behind two of them, as he passed with the water, a cough worked and worked and did not finish.

The wave had been walking the lower streets for days, house by house, the way weather walks. Now it had the snow for company, and the shop's high shelf stood behind the counter at one hundred and seventy-six, sealed in the autumn against exactly this: a winter that asked by the jar, not by the day.

He opened the shop and set the board out, and the street began to come before the light was full.

The seventh month of the standing order was made the way the standing order was always made, in the day's gaps, the standard unmoved: twelve sachets, no sachet tied unlabelled, while the counter's bell went and the jars came down off the high shelf one by one into hands that paid the board's price and carried them into the snow.

He took the box up the hill through the snow, the sachets dry in their straw. The clerk took the box at the long table. Every label was read, and six sachets of the clerk's choosing went onto the office scales, and came off them agreed, six of six. The clerk set the month's money out in hundreds — one thousand, four hundred and forty — and it went back into the box under Ren's count, the office's count and his the same.

Then the clerk took a second paper from the file's folder and laid it on the table, weighted with the scales' smallest weight to keep it from the draught.

It was not the file's paper. It bore the register office's heading, and under the heading a line copied out in the keeper's hand — the line the register had written in the autumn, copied whole:

Aoyama Yakusōten — outside supplier. The fever cure, in jars of the shop's standard. The wound powder, in sachets. At the board's prices, as posted.

Under the copied line, the requisition stood in the same hand. The office required of the shop, against its line in the register, twenty-four jars of the fever cure, at the price on the board — three hundred the jar, the street's price, no other named — to be delivered at the register office on the second day of the solstice week. And under the requirement, copied as the register had copied them, the shop's own two conditions stood on the paper: nothing without its label — the name, the drying week, the mark; and no date set by the office skipping the drying. The paper honoured its own wording: the jars it asked for already stood sealed on the shelf, and the date it named was a date the making had already met.

"The wards are filling from the lower streets," the clerk said. "The office's own stock is counted for the corps' houses first, the way it is always counted. The register keeps a line for the street's fever, and the line is yours. The paper is the line, working."

Ren went over the paper a second time, the way he read any paper that carried his name — for what it said, and for what it did not say. It did not ask for haste. It did not ask for a price under the board's. It asked for twenty-four jars that stood already made, under their labels, and named the morning they would climb the hill.

"It will be brought on the morning named," he said. "Counted out against the paper, at the office."

The clerk ruled the seventh month's line in the file, and folded the requisition once, and gave it into Ren's hand, and the paper went down the hill in the box with the money, under his coat against the snow.

The street was served by day, in full light, off the shelf.

That is what the shelf had been built for, and the serving of it was plain work, counted as it went: a jar down, a name told the taking of it — the whole course, three days, morning and evening, the cup hot. The price counted onto the counter, the jar carried out into the snow, under a coat, against a chest. No cart went anywhere in the night. No door was knocked at after dark. The wave took the street door by door in the open day, and the shop answered it door by door in the open day, and the book took a line for every jar, so the count would never have to be remembered — only read.

The coin of it went the counter's way: counted at the shutter, night by night, against the wave's pages, and kept as the counter's money is kept. It was not box money — the box's page for the year held the hill's lines only, and the wave was the street's.

At the counter, on a clean page, the winter list opened.

It was not the old list. The old list had been the wave's writing from the winter before, served off the making across a whole year. This one was written by the wave as it stood in the street, name by name, as the fever took the doors — each name with its house, and the day, and nothing promised beyond its turn.

Hana of the noodle stall came first, grey-faced, holding the counter's edge, and her name went down first because she stood there first. Old Jinsuke the lamplighter's name came by his grandson's mouth at noon — the old man had lit the street's lamps for forty years and would not leave his bed for a jar; the boy gave the taking back twice over, and slower the second time, as the shop had taught its carriers to give it. Third came Tami, the well keeper's sister, who had carried her fever three days before she let it be named, and paid out of a cloth knotted at her waist.

Then the names came faster than the day's jars could follow them, and the list did what lists do: it stood, and waited, in its order. The verse-writer's name came fourth — old Fumi, who had written the street's verses for fifty years: verses for weddings, verses for a child's naming, verses for the dead, paid in coin and soup and once, famously, in a chicken. Her niece brought the name and the word together: the fever had her, and she was asking — the niece's mouth twisted on it, with the ghost of the street's joke — whether the shop's book had room for one more name that had written so many.

"It has room," Ren said. "It is written fourth. It will be served fourth."

After Fumi's name the page filled as the doors fell: a carter's boy from the road yard; Ine, the candle-stall keeper's mother, whose name her daughter brought with the price already counted; and then the names of houses the shop knew by their doors and their trades, as the wave counted them off the street. By the week's turn the page stood at thirteen names, and the first three of them had been served in their order, off the shelf, as the day's jars allowed — Hana walking home grey but upright under her own shawl, the lamplighter's course carried up his lane by the boy, Tami's jar gone under her own coat. Ten names stood, in their order, waiting on the shelf's count and the street's days.

In the dusk of the wave's first week, the basket-mender's grandson came down the street, the empty basket riding on his back.

He was twelve, and the basket was his grandfather's, and it rode him the way a trade rides a boy before he grows into it. He did not come for a jar. He gave his word the way his grandfather had taught him to carry things: level, and in both hands.

Old Mori had died in his sleep, two nights before, in the first of the cold. He had eaten his supper. He had mended by the lamp till the hour he always stopped. He had not woken. There was no fever in it, the boy said — the house had had the fever in the summer, and the shop's course had done what the shop's course does, and the winter had not asked the fever's leave to take an old man in his sleep.

"His name stood in your book," the boy said. "He said a book that writes a name should know when the name is done. So I came to tell it."

Ren opened the day book at the page where the summer had written Mori's name — the eighth name of the old list, served in his turn, the course carried by this same boy in both hands, the price knotted in a cloth — and under the summer's line he wrote the winter's. In the book's plain hand: the name, and the day, and the fact. Nothing else. The book did not argue with the fact, and neither did the boy. He hitched the basket up on his back and went out into the snow, to a yard that would be his to keep now, at the hour the mending yards shut.

That night the day book took the week in the shop's own hand.

The seventh month stands delivered and accepted: twelve of twelve. In: one thousand, four hundred and forty. The box stands at two thousand, three hundred and ninety.

The register office has requisitioned against the shop's line in the register: twenty-four jars of the fever cure, at the board's price, for the morning of the solstice week's second day. The paper cites the line, and the shop's conditions stand copied on it, as they stand in the register. The register's first order is a paper this week. In the solstice week it will be jars and money.

The wave is in the street, and the snow is on the street with it. The shelf has given forty-one jars to the street since the snow came. The shelf stands at one hundred and thirty-five. The winter list stands at thirteen names entered; the first three are served, in their order. Ten stand.

Outside, the snow went on falling in the dark, straight down, without wind, on the shut doors and the open ones, on the hill and on the street alike. On the high shelf behind the counter, the year's making stood in its count, row over labelled row, and waited to be spent the way it had been made: one jar at a time, in the open day, against a name.